Research Paper

This week, I turned in my thesis statement and resources for research paper, to Mrs. Zion. I didnt do as well on it as I was hoping. I wasnt really sure what we were exactly supposed to do or how to write my thesis.

A few days ago, I changed my research paper topic, before I turned it in. I didnt feel like others liked my original idea, because it was too broad, so i changed it.

My original topic: To discuss the pros and cons of running, specifcally how it effects the joints. Does running really effect the joints that much? Is the elliptical and other workouts better than running? Is runnig really that healthy for you?
My view- Running is the best excercise in the world. The benefits of running outweight the small stress added to the joints through running.

My new topic: To discuss the pros and cons of running barefoot, specifically how it reduces the stress on bones, joints, and muscles.  Is it really better to run barefoot?
My view- Running barefoot is better then running with tennis shoes.

I think I like my new topic much better, because it will be easier to write about...but I feel like I didnt have enough time to research it enough, in order to give a good thesis.  Better continue to research some more!